Poin files: SinClair in Deep Run

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"Sheriff Hill said he did not believe the sexual acts took place at the school, and the relationship appeared to have been brief."

http://www.wcti12.com/news/music-teacher-had-sexual-relationship-with-student-sheriff-says/-/13530444/22425470/-/3hw5s2z/-/index.html?utm_source=twitterfeed&utm_medium=twitter
 
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Football_Bat said:
The story does not say whether the student was male or female.
Yeah, there was a part of the story that used brackets and the word "who."

“The school system acted quickly to investigate the rumors of this relationship," said Sheriff Hill. "My officers ran with the information and obtained a formal confession from SinClair and were able to obtain an interview with the student, [who] corroborated the statement of SinClair."
If "who" replaced "he" or "she," then the preceding comma would need to be either a period or a semicolon.
 

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