HeinekenMan
Active Member
When it comes to the website, is there anyone still employed who is capable of writing or editing copy? I ask because this is what I just found on a story about Tiger Woods that came from the Orlando Sentinel's Web site:
Tiger Woods isn't in Orlando any more — he's at Mississippi clinic known for treated sexual addiction, two television stations are reporting.
1. I asked my wife to read it, and she caught the "any more" problem.
2. Did they actually set that off with an em dash and a comma?
3. They forgot an article before Mississippi. But hey, the person spelled Mississippi correctly!
3. Obviously, it should be treating instead of treated.
I doubt that this was a product of the sports department. And, yes, it is a national holiday. Lord knows who is handling the Web site stuff today. With all of the cuts, I wouldn't be surprised to learn that someone from HR was in charge this morning. But I still want to bash my brains in when I read this kind of ridiculousness.
Just a few minutes before I saw this lead, I read a headline on my hometown paper's Web site that said "Mobile dental clinic read to roll." That paper has a much smaller staff and, arguably, a lot less talent than the Sentinel. It seems that our industry is moving toward an online product, but it appears that nobody is bothering to invest in this product. I would guess that the people working for online are generally less talented and less experienced than their print counterparts.
Of course, the elephant in the room is that some TV stations in Mississippi are breaking this news. I don't even want to go there.
Does anyone edit the online copy in your newsroom?
Are the people writing for the web as qualified as the people writing for print?
Tiger Woods isn't in Orlando any more — he's at Mississippi clinic known for treated sexual addiction, two television stations are reporting.
1. I asked my wife to read it, and she caught the "any more" problem.
2. Did they actually set that off with an em dash and a comma?
3. They forgot an article before Mississippi. But hey, the person spelled Mississippi correctly!
3. Obviously, it should be treating instead of treated.
I doubt that this was a product of the sports department. And, yes, it is a national holiday. Lord knows who is handling the Web site stuff today. With all of the cuts, I wouldn't be surprised to learn that someone from HR was in charge this morning. But I still want to bash my brains in when I read this kind of ridiculousness.
Just a few minutes before I saw this lead, I read a headline on my hometown paper's Web site that said "Mobile dental clinic read to roll." That paper has a much smaller staff and, arguably, a lot less talent than the Sentinel. It seems that our industry is moving toward an online product, but it appears that nobody is bothering to invest in this product. I would guess that the people working for online are generally less talented and less experienced than their print counterparts.
Of course, the elephant in the room is that some TV stations in Mississippi are breaking this news. I don't even want to go there.
Does anyone edit the online copy in your newsroom?
Are the people writing for the web as qualified as the people writing for print?