Critique wanted

[vonbaxter]

I am fairly new on the journalism scene and am writing for free right now at MVN.com to build up a portfolio and get experience. I would love it if you could all take a look at my first feature length article and give me some feedback. You can post it on the comments on the site or here!

Thank you in advance!

Chris

http://mvn.com/thelastpage/2007/10/28/it%e2%80%99s-a-fantasy-world-we-live-in/

 

[imjustagirl2]

von,

First of all, welcome. Second, there's a place called the WRiter's Workshop on the Journalism Topics Only board. People post their stories, and others read and critique. The comments are usually spot on and positive, but while also pointing out faults.

Try to post it over there.

Good luck!