Another piece

[JD]

http://www.dailydemocrat.com/sports/ci_7268455


Check it out, let me know what you think. Thanks in advance.

 

[jlee]

I'd slim down the lede a little. There's a lot of info that can wait until later. Let the readers know the Wolves backs are against the wall, but say that they lost, making Thursday's game a must-win, a little quicker.

I'd avoid "not so fast" anywhere outside of a column. And "too little too late" is unnecessary also.

You answered "what does this mean" well, and I came away feeling I knew a decent amount about Woodland soccer just by reading the article.