How to write an article about a sucky season?

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Posey_Lynn96

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Hi, I am a high school student and I have to write an article about our schools tennis team. They did great last year, but this year they have lost 16 matches. How do I put a good spin on it so I don't step on any toes? I would love your honest opinions.
Thanks,
Posey Lynn :)
 
Re: How to write a article about a sucky season?

Hoo boy. Is this legit?
 
Re: How to write a article about a sucky season?

Yeah... the coach only gave me two quotes about how they're improving, but they have lost every game.
 
Re: How to write a article about a sucky season?

Tennis match. Not game. An article, as you have in your post. Not a article as you have in subject.
 
Can anyone actually help me or is this forum only for trolling exasperated high school journalists?
 
Write what happened. Don't sugarcoat, don't overwrite. Let the facts tell the story.
 
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Posey_Lynn96 said:
Yeah... the coach only gave me two quotes about how they're improving, but they have lost every game.

Talk to some of the players too. And you may just end up doing the story we love most here, about how hard they're trying. Also ... What Moddy Said about terminology.
 
Posey_Lynn96, I like your gumption (even if you probably want to avoid calling Moderator1 a troll, for future reference). My high school newspaper was nothing more than school-authorized fluff.

Here's what you do:

1. Figure out what the difference is between this team and last year's team. Interview players and coaches with specific, real questions rather than softballs.
2. Spell that out for readers. Back up everything you write with facts. Don't beat around the bush, don't make assumptions and don't take spin for fact.
3. Take view of the big picture. You understand, at this point, why things didn't work out. Is there reason to think those issues will be addressed for the future?
4. Print what you know, not what you think or what you're told to think.
 
Speaking as someone who does edit a high school newspaper, this smells way more like a sock puppet than an actual question. OP goes from earnest youngster to critic of Internet message boards in three posts.
 
posey - ok, here goes: if they kicked tail a year ago and they sucked this year.
- ID this as a rebuilding year ... if indeed it was.
- reinterview coach and ask him/her if it was a rebuilding year, and if in fact it was, a.) what did his/her team learn this year? b.) how is her/her going to learn from this year's rough win-loss record? c.) what will the coach focus on next year heading into the season? d.) how was the team's moral through the season? e.) who is going to lead the team into next season? f.) are there any key losses? g.) and this is the most important question to ask: is there anything important about this season or next that i haven't asked you that you'd like to add?

interview at least one player who will play a key role on next year's team and insert quotes when you write about one or more of the following: ANY OF THE QUESTIONS ABOVE. and then interview one of the important players that is leaving and get a quote about something that the team learned and use that person as a senior voice of authority.

most of all, always lean toward quoting a player first. bottom line is, is the players are the ones between the lines. at the end of the day, your readers want to know what those who actually play the sport think, not what the guy/gal who is pist because his/her team is 0-16 thinks.

also, lede with the most interesting concept that might/could link this year's team to next year's team and go from there. if you can 360 the piece - make the first paragraph and the final paragraph kinda mesh - you hit a home run.

also, if you give me a little advance notice, spellcheck your story and limit your piece to 25 paragraphs or less, i'll give it a first read and a bit of advice if you'd like before you turn it in. i'd pretty much assure you an A on the piece. but one misspelled word, and i'm out.
 
Can you tell a noob poster to get me a beer if they are fronting as a high school student?
 
Posey sounds like a poseur. How could any team have lost 16 of anything in a school year that just started? And, the tone of their third post, like sgreenwell said, is a dead giveaway.

Just sayin'.
 
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Wilson stands out in trying Chicago St. season

Bad teams eventually come to the realization wins and losses don't really matter.

Jonathon Wilson and the Chicago State Cougars reached that point two weeks into the season. Facing strong Division I talent every other day, the team is 0-21 this year, having been outscored 213-58.

Despite the gloom and doom, the Cougars have seen three bright spots — aside from 10 days in Hawaii earlier this month — in an otherwise dreadful season.

They've lost two games this season by a single run, including a 3-2 decision against a powerhouse Hawaii team, and the club is outscoring opponents in the ninth inning by an 11-2 mark.

The third and perhaps most encouraging sign has been the play of right fielder Jonathon Wilson. The former St. Patrick-St. Vincent High standout is hitting a team-high .291 for the Cougars this season, leading the club in doubles (5) and RBI (8 ).

"I've felt pretty good this season," said Wilson, a transfer from Napa Valley College, where he was a two-year standout. "I mean, we've lost a lot, but I've been able to play in a lot of different situations and contribute on offense."

Starting each of the Cougars' 21 games this season, Wilson is the only regular contributor on the team's score sheet. Sifting through the wreckage of a recent 17-4 drubbing, Wilson went 2-for-4 with an RBI, and he's strung together modest five and six-game hitting streaks this season.

Shifting from the third to fifth spot in the batting order this season, the talented fielder has some pop in his bat and makes good contact, causing opposing pitchers to take notice whenever he steps into the batter's box.

"He's been our most consistent hitter this season," said Chicago State head coach Vern Hasty. "I've been trying to slot him in where he'll be most effective, but I wish I had a couple more like him to fill out the roster a little."

Chicago State's overmatched roster isn't their only worry; the school is a Division I independent this season after leaving the Mid-Continent Conference, of which it was a member since 1994. The baseball team has had trouble drawing opponents to their home field, resulting in a heavy travel schedule. The Cougars are scheduled to play 55 games this season, with only six of them on home turf.

The team played its home opener — nearly six weeks after the season began — Tuesday night, dropping an 11-1 decision to Northern Illinois. Wilson managed a couple hits, raising his batting average a couple points.

"There weren't many people there," Wilson said. "Most people around campus probably don't remember we even have a team."

Playing schools from Hawaii to New Orleans to Virginia, the Cougars are on the road every other weekend, and sometimes for long stretches. That means whatever lovable-loser quality the team could possess is lost playing in front of hostile crowds.

"It's tough being on the road so much, but I guess it's just preparing me for the big leagues, right?" Wilson said, laughing. "I'm just enjoying the chance to play so much and having fun with it. We get to see a lot of different places, the coaches are great, and the guys always make it fun."

Taking it all in stride, Wilson is making the best of a difficult on-field situation and enjoying whatever comes his way, wherever he happens to be. When asked if he misses home cooking being on the road so often, he answers the way most college students would.

"My fridge is pretty bare right now, and I probably eat a lot better on the road."

From a nutritional standpoint, Wilson's playing for the right team.
 
WolvEagle said:
Posey sounds like a poseur. How could any team have lost 16 of anything in a school year that just started? And, the tone of their third post, like sgreenwell said, is a dead giveaway.

Just sayin'.

wow. i think i was suckered ... and i don't get suckered all that often.
now i want that 10 minutes back.
 

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