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I didn't make myself clear, I guess.

His religion is part of the story, but it shouldn't be part of every quote (which you implied it was in the opening post).

I'll reconsider...

Limit Jesus to things that relate directly to the kids spirituality. "My life changed after I..." When he talks about soccer, keep it to soccer.
 
NoTalentAndFatToo said:
Limit Jesus to things that relate directly to the kids spirituality. "My life changed after I..." When he talks about soccer, keep it to soccer.

Exactly.

If you asked him about a particularly great goal he scored and the kid said "I was able to do that because of Jesus" then don't use the quote.

But if you asked him about why his life turned around and the kid said "I was able to do that because of Jesus" then use it.
 
I'm still waiting for a kid with a pentagram tattoo to tell me the reason his team won state was because he sold his soul to the Dark Lord Satan.
 
pressboxer said:
I'm still waiting for a kind with a pentagram tattoo to tell me the reason his team won state was because he sold his soul to the Dark Lord Satan.

Seriously, though, wouldn't that be an awesome story if the kid was serious?
 
Trouser_Buddah said:
You're doing a story about this kid...This is what the kid is about. So that's what you write about. Simple. You can't eliminate an important part of what makes your subject who he is simply because it annoys you or goes against something you believe in.

If this kid told you that he felt a certain training technique was vital to his skills and that he used a traumatic life experience to motivate him, you'd most certainly write about it.

But because there's a general cynicism about religion, you will ignore something that clearly has impacted him, and in his mind, is crucial to where he is in life. And if that happens, you are not painting an accurate picture of this kid.

And before I get jumped for being a Jesus freak, this is about journalism, not religion.

Nice post. We have so many people here who are knee-jerk anti-religion. Yes, there are hypocrites and phonies, but does that mean we should discount everybody with religious beliefs?

Edit: Good posts by Ike and Mystery Meat, too. I posted this response before I'd gotten down to them.
 
Meat summed it up pretty perfectly as far as I'm concerned, and I'm a non-practicing Jew who's about as irreligious as it gets.
 
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If this kid *really* has made a life change, if he has gone from a bad kid to a good kid, if he's charismatic enough to have made a difference in his teammates' lives, perhaps you should consider a different approach to this story.

Rather than making a few obligatory superficial references to his faith, rather than letting the kid prattle on about God this and God that, rather than trying to shoehorn that stuff into a standard-issue 12-inch featurette, how about using a show-don't-tell approach to telling the story and putting it together as a weekend centerpiece?

Spend a day with him. Poke your head inside the team huddle. Listen in the locker room. Capture what you see on the field, on the bus, in the classroom, wherever. See if it's for real. See what kind of effect he has on the people around him. See what kind of effect it's had on him today compared to how he was previously. See if he's truly a spiritual team leader or ethical standard bearer or what have you. Talk to people -- teammates, coaches, parents, neighbors, teachers, etc. Capture a lot of detail. Gather whatever you need to put together a decent magazine-style piece -- one that lets the reader see for himself how religion has affected one teenager's life and his game.

Use your journalism instincts. If you like what you see and hear -- if you believe the transformation is for real and he is enjoying some success on the field as well -- if you truly believe this is a good story -- write it. This could make a truly different feature story, a personality profile, a slice of teenage life that's far beyond the standard fare you'll find in the Sports section.

Here's the bottom line, as I see it: It sounds like religion plays a major role in his life now, so you can't ignore it. If you do, you'll look disingenuous in the eyes of the people who know him. And if you try to put it into an obligatory 12-incher, you'll look like you're just paying lip service before moving on to the "real reason" you're writing the story -- he loves God, but he bends it like Beckham.

You're definitely in a quandary here. It's a soccer story and it's a religion story (strikes 1 and 2). But it could be a really good feature if the elements are right and your approach is right. (Disclaimers: I like soccer but I'm not fanatical about it. Also, I expect to go to heaven someday but I'm not fanatical about that, either.)

Granted, this might not work -- you're much closer to the story than I am. But I wanted to share a different line of thinking from a neutral corner.

For what it's worth, I used to work as assistant sports editor at a major metro daily, overseeing enterprise stories, and if this story is approached as I described and if you're able to find the good material, it's exactly the kind of personality profile I would have scheduled as a Sunday centerpiece. Now I work at a monthly regional magazine, and this is exactly the kind of personality profile I currently schedule for our feature well.

Just a thought.
 
buckweaver said:
Two pages in, and no mention of the undeniable proof that God, indeed, knows all about world-class soccer? For shame. ;D

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Brilliant!
 

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