andykmoore
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Hey everyone,
First time ever posting on the site, so bear with me if I break any rules or anything.
I wanted to get feedback on a story I wrote a few weeks ago about a subject well-known to many of you, John Feinstein: http://dukechronicle.com/article/brink-1. I spent a good amount of time on the story, and I was of course lucky to have a great person to write about, but I'd love some constructive criticism of the piece. I'm trying to make a go of this business after I graduate, so I'd really like to learn as much as I can from this story.
Thanks!
Andy
First time ever posting on the site, so bear with me if I break any rules or anything.
I wanted to get feedback on a story I wrote a few weeks ago about a subject well-known to many of you, John Feinstein: http://dukechronicle.com/article/brink-1. I spent a good amount of time on the story, and I was of course lucky to have a great person to write about, but I'd love some constructive criticism of the piece. I'm trying to make a go of this business after I graduate, so I'd really like to learn as much as I can from this story.
Thanks!
Andy
