The winning piece on Dylan Roof is good, but when did it become so appropriate to insert oneself into a feature story, or, why is it labeled as such? The first-person was very distracting to me, and while the reporting was solid, it didn't feel to me deserving of the Pulitzer.
I completely agree with all of this. It was "searing" in parts, as it was described in the little capsuled description of it, but only because of the deed, and Roof's lack of response in the face and wake of it. Otherwise, that piece was more like an essay, and even, almost, an opinion piece in places, not a feature story.
And the author's inclusion of herself in the piece is what made it that way.
The first-person parts were
very distracting, and even badly inappropriate, at times (see the part near the end, especially) -- for a feature story. What's more, I didn't feel like I found out anything about Dylann Roof, or his motivations, or "what happened to him" that I didn't already know or expect. This piece won just on the basis of its subject matter, that's it, as is sometimes the case when awarding recognition.
The best, most informed and telling part of the whole story came from Roof himself:
"Sometimes, more now than before the incident, I feel that the people I talk to hang on my words as if they were all important or offer some sort of insight into my being. But this isn't the case; it never is with anyone. For example, I stated before I never used drugs to ‘drown the pain,’ or ‘self medicate.’ I used drugs because they get you high. There is no deeper meaning behind this. There is no deeper meaning behind any of my behavior.”
That's what I think of him, too. It's why he had no explanation to offer, or even that he
could offer, for his actions, and no one else did, either. He was just an undeveloped, shallow, directionless kid who did something horrible just because he could. No one knew, or knows, who he is (not even the author, although she claims she does), because there's nothing deeper to him.