Cover letter critique

[BertoltBrecht]

Hey, I've written a cover letter for a job I'd kill to have. I was wondering if anyone would help me out and critique it for me. I'll send in a PM, so as to not out myself to everyone.

 

[jgmacg]

BB -

Sorry to have been so derelict here. If there's still time, please feel free to PM me.

 

[sirvaliantbrown]

BB, I'm a decent cover-letter-er. Feel free to send it along if you'd like.