MrBSquared
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I see more and more stuff like this on Web sites:
"He approached the media hoard with a smile that could charm a supermodel — and has."
That is Alex Marvez' lead on the Fox Sports site, the opening to his feature on Tom Brady.
Didn't know the NFL was stockpiling reporters ... thought that was MLB.com's job.
The word is horde ...
With all the capable copy editors out there available these days, you'd think some of the bigger sites would cut back on the chaff (*cough* *cough* Reilly *cough* *cough*) and hire people to edit copy.
Just a thought.
"He approached the media hoard with a smile that could charm a supermodel — and has."
That is Alex Marvez' lead on the Fox Sports site, the opening to his feature on Tom Brady.
Didn't know the NFL was stockpiling reporters ... thought that was MLB.com's job.
The word is horde ...
With all the capable copy editors out there available these days, you'd think some of the bigger sites would cut back on the chaff (*cough* *cough* Reilly *cough* *cough*) and hire people to edit copy.
Just a thought.