This is an e-mail i received from a - drum roll please - swim parent after our state coverage.
Anything in CAPS is me replacing our school's names.
First off I would like to comment on your coverage of the girls swim meet on Saturday this past weekend. You barely mention that LOCAL TOWN girls came in at 15th. There was absolutely no mention of any girls names let alone that one of them came in 8th place in the breast stroke or that there were only 5 girls present to begin with. There are girls that put in a lot of time in the pool just as much as the boys team and because they were not as fast you totally brushed them off to the side.
For this particular paper, we cover three schools. This paren't school didn't get much mention because no one did anything and one of our schools finished top four and had one swimmer who set two state, pool and meet records - she's a future olympian.The next day at the boys meet, I featured this woman's school because they had two double gold winners and one relay wins.
In this same boys story, our local team that won five of the 11 events wasn't even close to winning and I mentioned - with quotes from coaches - about how the scoring at these meets favors the larger schools, not the ones with the best swimmers.
Apparently, this same woman didn't appreciate it.
My son graduated from STATE PRIVATE SCHOOL NOT IN OUR COVERAGE AREA and (yes local boys do go to Hendricken too and you have never covered them), do you think that OUR LOCAL BOY WITH TWO MEDALS and HIS TEAMMATE are the only hard working swimmers on the boys????? You need to have a more balanced coverage if you want to be listed as a sports
writer. You don't even mention all the boys that placed in events. What about LOCAL BOY WHO DIDN'T GET TOP THREE in the breast stroke. Take your head out of the chlorinated air and get your facts and names in the paper to be a real journalist.
So at this point, I'm agitated. Then she calls me out.
You probably will not respond to my email but if you are big enough to admit that you did an inept coverage feel free to contact my work email also that I listed in the cc section.
I wrote a response, took a break, then edited myself and sent her a final response, pointing out the fact that we are a newspaper - we report news. A bad team losing is not news. I mentioned newsworthy stuff - medal winners. She added a PS to the letter about not mentioning her daughter and I wanted to - but didn't - write something along the line of "if you want your daughter's name in the paper, tell her to swim faster."