New Column

I have started a new weekly column on RealGM Baseball and I would love some feedback...

These are the two links for the two articles I have written for this weekly column so far.

http://www.realgmbaseball.com/src_calltothebullpen/56/20070828/baseball_bits_and_bites_monroe_maddux_reinsdorf_and_more

http://www.realgmbaseball.com/src_calltothebullpen/57/20070905/baseball_bits_and_bites_the_joba_rules_and_more/


Your thoughts?

Thanks

 

Mr 12,

I enjoyed the two pieces, easily digested info, but real they're nuts-and-bolts notebooks rather than columns. If you write something longer, single theme, could be news, column and feature, I'll look at it line by line if you like. Hard to critique something like this.

YHS, etc

 

jonsie12 -

Thanks for sharing your work with us.

Like FotF, I think these are solid notebook entries. As such, they're hard to fault - or to judge for literary merit.

Keep at it, and feel free to bring us your work - longform or short - whenever you like.