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New Column

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by jonsie12, Sep 5, 2007.

  1. jonsie12

    jonsie12 New Member

    I have started a new weekly column on RealGM Baseball and I would love some feedback...

    These are the two links for the two articles I have written for this weekly column so far.



    Your thoughts?

  2. friend of the friendless

    friend of the friendless Active Member

    Mr 12,

    I enjoyed the two pieces, easily digested info, but real they're nuts-and-bolts notebooks rather than columns. If you write something longer, single theme, could be news, column and feature, I'll look at it line by line if you like. Hard to critique something like this.

    YHS, etc
  3. jgmacg

    jgmacg Guest

    jonsie12 -

    Thanks for sharing your work with us.

    Like FotF, I think these are solid notebook entries. As such, they're hard to fault - or to judge for literary merit.

    Keep at it, and feel free to bring us your work - longform or short - whenever you like.
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