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High school football gamer

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by e_bowker, Oct 13, 2014.

  1. e_bowker

    e_bowker Member

    We've actually had some activity here recently, so I figured I'd ask for some feedback on my high school football gamer from Friday night. Great game, and a dramatic last-play win for the team I was covering. I thought the story turned out pretty well, but there's also a few things nagging me about it, so I figured I'd let y'all be the judge.
    Rip away!

    http://www.vicksburgpost.com/2014/10/11/a-warren-central-walk-off/
     
    e_bowker, Oct 13, 2014
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