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Help me! Quick! Please?!

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by SoSueMe, Apr 11, 2007.

  1. SoSueMe

    SoSueMe Active Member

    I never thought I'd turn to the SJ Nation for wedding planning advice, nor did I think I'd post it here on Journalism topics, but it's kind of a design question.

    Anyway, this is quick. How do you break this:

    Dr. and Mrs. Bob Smith request
    the honour of your presence at the marriage
    of their daughter . . .


    OR


    Dr. and Mrs. Bob Smith request the
    honour of your presence at the marriage of
    their daughter . . .

    The question is, where do the words "the" and "of" go?
     
  2. slappy4428

    slappy4428 Active Member

    We're honoured you asked us....
    "the" goes before honour...
    Of is part of a prepositional phrase -- of their daughter... so, third line.
     
  3. SoSueMe

    SoSueMe Active Member

    Nice. I got it right the first time.

    Thanks slappy.

    And yes, I caught the "honoured" Canuck poke.
     
  4. slappy4428

    slappy4428 Active Member

    You're a Canuckistani?
    Who knew?
     
  5. imjustagirl2

    imjustagirl2 New Member

    I agree with Slappy.
     
  6. Rosie

    Rosie Active Member

    Dr. and Mrs. Bob Smith request
    the honour of your presence
    at the marriage of their daughter . . .

    That's how I would print it.

    (I've had lots of practice with this lately -- I've been helping out a relative who's getting married this summer.)
     
  7. PeteyPirate

    PeteyPirate Guest

    I'm not sure I would do anything until DyePack weighs in.
     
  8. 100% agree with Rosie...Break it down into the three individual parts...

    THEY request
    YOUR presence
    DAUGHTER's wedding....
     
  9. fishwrapper

    fishwrapper Active Member

    FIXED.
     
  10. cougargirl

    cougargirl Active Member

    exclusivelyweddings.com has templates you can use when ordering invitations. Pretty good stuff to pick any way you want to deliver the message saying, "You're invited to our big party ..."
     
  11. Jones

    Jones Active Member

    Also, "open bar" is two words.

    And yes, I'll be there.
     
  12. sportschick

    sportschick Active Member

    So what happens if the parents are divorced and remarried multiple times?

    Like mine would read:

    Dr. SC dad and Dr. SC dad's wife, SC mom and SC stepdad and SC stepmom and SC stepmom's partner request the honor of your presence at the wedding of their daughter . . .

    Mine is so gonna read:

    SC is getting hitched . . .
     
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