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Feedback needed on football profile

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by 5RunHomer, Jul 16, 2011.

  1. 5RunHomer

    5RunHomer New Member

    I struggled mightily trying to write this one. The guy went from D-I college football recruit, to being shot and losing every offer he had. After months of recovery, he went on to go to a D-II school where he was a two-time All-American. Without giving too much away -- believe me, there's much, much more -- he returned to his alma mater last year to be a volunteer coach and this season will be the offensive coordinator. Keep in mind he's only 26 years old.

    I walked away from writing this one with my head spinning. It's one of those stories where I don't know if anything in it worked. Let me know what you think did work, what didn't and what you might change. Thanks, all.

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