Good point. I didn't think about that. By the way, you're not doing Chris Bosh any favors with your imaginary transcription: ;D
Talk about an evergreen headline... But I'm specifically wondering about Dave Kindred. He wasn't on the back page of last week's issue, and...
I just really like this line, from the original story:
I don't know if Stars and Stripes is going through a major expansion or if they just have a lot of turnover, but they've advertised at least a...
A good point. Here's an example from the story above: Would the story be improved if ezduzit changed that paragraph to something like this?...
There are a couple problems with this sentence. I'm guessing you re-wrote the story at some point and "Schottenheimer" just got left in there....
Maybe it's because I don't live in New York (in fact, it's almost certainly that) but I thought that was a pretty creative way to put it. When I...
Look on the bright side: At least you aren't Michael Jordan's dad.
Separate names with a comma.
