Show us don't tell us. How does he dribble, shoot, pass etc? More detail would bring more life to this. I think you're bordering on too many...
A more specific question would be: when writing dialogue like this, is italicizing the kids answers the way to denote it? I didn't really know,...
I'm not sure. I wrote it in past tense originally, but changed it.
I tried a little different style for a recent column. Whether it was a good idea to write at 2:30 a.m. hopped up on Loratab? You be the judge....
This is the bread and butter type article that I write every week, so I hope to improve on this style. Please, please, give me your thoughts....
I don't have a gag reflex, so it works out pretty well Shaggy.
Man, 60 people have looked at my column, and no one has anything to offer me? I'm new to this site, but I though this was a workshop? Help a...
I recently won Utah sportswriter of the year, and would love to work for you. Let me know, and I'll send you some clips. I can be reached at...
I'm a recent college grad who is hungry to improve. You may remember this story. About a month after I wrote this, Ricky Reilly called and put...
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