Who, exactly, did the dominating?

Yes.

 

Tebow Christ, go get laid.

 

Wait - you really thought Lewis was talking about how LeBron carried the Magic on his back?

 

On second thought, I do actually sort of see the point of this thread. Obviously, Lewis doesn't mean LeBron ... but there are three names in the preceding paragraph and the quote just says "He."

The reader does have to go back and re-skim the original paragraph to figure out who "He" is. It's obvious. But you might have to go back and try to decipher it.

It isn't a big deal, but I might have included some kind of clarifier, just to be safe.

 

Not a huge deal, and probably not worthy of a thread, but it would have been better to include a quick set-up graph with some more details on Howard's big game. Clears up the confusion and adds more context.

 

I'm more concerned about the 50 word lead

 

Yeah, that's what I'm thinking.