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Use of "passes away"

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by Mr. X, Jun 21, 2007.

  1. MTM

    MTM Well-Known Member

    Passes away is not a synonym. As other have said, people die.
    Perhaps someone who dies of natural causes while sleeping passes away, but I wouldn't use it there either.
    One of our deskers always changes "the soldier died in Iraq" to "the soldier was killed in Iraq" to be more accurate.
     
  2. WazzuGrad00

    WazzuGrad00 Guest

    It's not a synonym, it's a euphamism. We don't write about things to make people feel better. We write about it to inform people.
     
  3. sportsed

    sportsed Member

    You mean they really didn't go to puppy heaven?
     
  4. zeke12

    zeke12 Guest

    The minute you use passes away, you are opening the door to "went home to his sweet Lord Jesus."

    They died. That's what you write.

    It's a form of euphemistic double-speak, and, as such, has no business in the newspaper.

    Neither do terms like "collateral damage" or "coalition of the willing" or a million other things, either, by the way.
     
  5. Moderator1

    Moderator1 Moderator Staff Member

    Died.
    The first boss I ever had as an intern made that point in our first meeting. Hated "passed away" or any variation.
    He's dead. A perfectly good word.
    He died. A perfectly good word.
     
  6. chazp

    chazp Active Member

    Go to sleep in Christ? That's awful. Thankfully I've never read that one before now.
     
  7. ondeadline

    ondeadline Well-Known Member

    Kind of off the subject, but the way obituaries are written these days since they are paid for have some of the most hilarious flowery language.
     
  8. shecky

    shecky Member

    I had always hated "passed away." I thought when my father died last month my opinion might change.
    Nope. When people tell me they're sorry my father passed away, I thank them then cringe. I was there with him. He didn't pass away. He died. Nothing painful about speaking the truth. No need to put cherries on it.
     
  9. Flip Wilson

    Flip Wilson Well-Known Member

    Longest, most flowery-written obit on any non-famous person I've ever read. It was written by her husband (owner of the funeral home), and does include this line: "Perhaps she experienced the most joy as she nursed our sons for the first fourteen months of their lives."

    http://www.legacy.com/WacoTrib/Obituaries.asp?Page=LifeStory&PersonID=88721136
     
  10. Dan Rydell

    Dan Rydell Guest

    You don't pass away in a car wreck. You die there.

    Don't say "pass away" in a hed, but it's ok sometimes in the story.
     
  11. Overrated

    Overrated Guest

  12. doubledown68

    doubledown68 Active Member

    First, I think it's always "died".

    Having said that, some of the euphamisms for death are funny as hell... going on to glory, resting in the arms of jesus, shuffling off the mortal coil, tripping the light fantastic (never seen it, someone said it once.. always struck me as cool/wierd), snuffing it, checking out (a favorite of my dad, for some reason).
     
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