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Selena Roberts column on Kaleb Eulls - perfect

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by Dave Kindred, Sep 11, 2009.

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  1. SF_Express

    SF_Express Active Member

    Boy, Dave, I'm really in between on those last two sentences. I say, completely wishy-washily, that I think it works both ways. I wouldn't have given the order a second thought if you hadn't mentioned it.
     
    SF_Express, Sep 14, 2009
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  2. jlee

    jlee Well-Known Member

    I'm for striking the last two sentences in favor of something else. Great column, but those last two lines lacked substance, made especially glaring after reading 750 carefully chosen, meaningful words.
     
    jlee, Sep 14, 2009
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