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Seeking feedback on my player profile

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by Zoomy575M, Sep 28, 2011.

  1. Zoomy575M

    Zoomy575M New Member

    Hey there all,

    Been stalking the forums for a while to get a feel for the place and I have enjoyed reading advice and feedback. Now I am very interested to see what you all have to say about my work.


    Here is my most recent piece on a breakout high school football star in Long Beach, CA. I am interested in improving my writing however possible, so do not hold back. Now that I'm posting I would be happy to offer advice in return so feel free to contact me.

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