Seeking feedback on my player profile

Hey there all,

Been stalking the forums for a while to get a feel for the place and I have enjoyed reading advice and feedback. Now I am very interested to see what you all have to say about my work.

http://www.gazettes.com/sports/st_anthonys/feature-javen-lopez-starring-at-st-anthony/article_e7da87a4-e4cc-11e0-9310-001cc4c002e0.html

Here is my most recent piece on a breakout high school football star in Long Beach, CA. I am interested in improving my writing however possible, so do not hold back. Now that I'm posting I would be happy to offer advice in return so feel free to contact me.

Thanks!