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out-effin'-standing take on bonds...

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by shockey, Aug 5, 2007.

  1. Songbird

    Songbird Well-Known Member

    It's interesting. I won't knock the writing, but I felt all the way through that this piece was months in the writing and put in the bottle and uncorked last night for print.

    To be honest, I'd rather read something that was written the day a record such as this was broken, having the writer write the piece with his/her emotion and perspective of the moment.
     
  2. king cranium maximus IV

    king cranium maximus IV Active Member

    like grant farred, selena needs to own up to the duke rape hoax before her stuff is worth reading.
     
  3. The Big Ragu

    The Big Ragu Moderator Staff Member

    This could be true. But when she was covering the Knicks, she did some of the best writing on deadline I have ever seen. She amazed me with her ability to turn a phrase on a tight deadline. The woman can clearly write -- whether you agree with the point of view of this column or not.
     
  4. Songbird

    Songbird Well-Known Member

    I don't doubt she's a pro on deadline. I've read some of her things. I just think this has been in the can a while.

    I guess I'm indifferent to the column. It didn't move me, but it was readable.
     
  5. KP

    KP Active Member

    Isn't Balco really an acronym and be spelled out as BALCO? Style issue?
     
  6. GB-Hack

    GB-Hack Active Member

    The NYT goes lowercase on some acronyms, for example Nascar instead of NASCAR.
     
  7. rpmmutant

    rpmmutant Member

    That was one of the best writing I've seen from a sportswriter in a long time. Give her credit for having strong writing skills and an even stronger vocabulary. It's nice to read something that elevates the language and doesn't write to the lowest common denominator.
     
  8. I enjoyed the story. It's a good read. And Xan, I agree it sounds like it's been bottled up inside of her for a while, but I don't think it's a bad thing at all in this case.

    Good job, Ms. Roberts.
     
  9. Songbird

    Songbird Well-Known Member

    You want some twenty-five-cent vocabulary? Read Krikorian on a regular basis.
     
  10. Twoback

    Twoback Active Member

    Nicely written.
    I still ask the lingering question:
    In order to cheat, mustn't one do something that is against the rules?
     
  11. buckweaver

    buckweaver Active Member

    Dear god. Don't ever subject him to that. [/insertpukingsmileyhere]
     
  12. Pete Incaviglia

    Pete Incaviglia Active Member

    My point exactly.
     
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