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Minor league baseball feature

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by ejhayes737, Jul 5, 2011.

  1. ejhayes737

    ejhayes737 Member

    Hey guys. Attached is the link to an article I wrote about a local kid who was drafted by the St. Louis Cardinals. I'd greatly appreciate any tips and critiques. Thanks!

    -Elton

    http://lorton.patch.com/articles/stallion-graduate-kyle-hald-lands-with-cardinals
     
    ejhayes737, Jul 5, 2011
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  2. ejhayes737

    ejhayes737 Member

    Anything guys?
     
    ejhayes737, Jul 6, 2011
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