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Latest story for The Shelbyville News

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by Patrick Murphy, May 14, 2019.

  1. Patrick Murphy

    Patrick Murphy New Member

    Hello. Here's my latest story for The Shelbyville News. Feedback is appreciated again.

    Link to story: The Shelbyville News - shelbynews.com
     
  2. Slacker

    Slacker Well-Known Member

    Where is Cooper today? Don't leave readers wondering. Big hole in story. If he's dead, tell when he died.
     
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