I am young and looking for a critique

Or you know, just call them.

 

Dammit, Bat, you're going to cost the kid a scholarship! He works just as hard as reporters at the New York Times and deserves some critiques!

 

Nothing wrong with the Bleacher Report. Mike Lupica writes from his couch.

 

Okay just finished (and edited) my latest piece on pat venditte (switch pitcher)I think it is my best article yet so if you get a chance take a look. http://bleacherreport.com/articles/362191-pat-venditte-more-than-a-gimmick?just_published=1

 

sounds like a good idea. I will do this probably on Tuesday (play in game) because I am really busy until Monday. Thanks for your help.

 

I did. However it seems to be very slow over there so I also posted here. Sorry if it is a problem.

 

Grammar.

 

fixed?

 

is that better?
Also did anyone read my article?

 

You're not going to get a top beat-writing job from what you write now or how much time you put in at the Podunk Daily Bugle. Relax, Enjoy the next 9 years before you have to worry about a job. Spend time with friends.

By the way, if you continue begging for critiques, the replies are just going to get worse.

 

I am not looking to get a job based on this. Just looking to improve my skills. And i am not begging for critiques, and if it comes off that way I am sorry.