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High school gamers- Sorry I keep posting these.

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by SteveRomano13, Oct 20, 2014.

  1. SteveRomano13

    SteveRomano13 Member

    Hey Guys,

    If you don't already hate me for posting so many boring Mass high school football games, here's two more.

    If anyone gets a chance, please take a look at either, or both, and just give any feedback.

    Thanks again.


  2. MeanGreenATO

    MeanGreenATO Member

    I'm a fan of the persistence. I would definitely try to add a couple more sources in each of these stories, preferably from the head coach. I also like that you included records in the latter story, but they were way too high. It's something that should definitely be in the story, though.
  3. SteveRomano13

    SteveRomano13 Member

    Thanks man.
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