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Grammar Question

Discussion in 'Journalism topics only' started by LazyReporter, Nov 13, 2008.

  1. reformedhack

    reformedhack Well-Known Member

    Yes, it is, but that wasn't the question LazyReporter posed.

    I'm not going to presume why the sentence was written that way. Maybe it was for specificity. Maybe it was for effect. But if the dependent clause is there, it's was. If the commas are removed, it's were.
     
  2. Dickens Cider

    Dickens Cider New Member

    Not arguing that. But even if you keep the plays part, losing the commas improves the flow of the sentence, which is why I posted what I did.
     
  3. reformedhack

    reformedhack Well-Known Member

    But doing so may change the meaning of the sentence.

    The question was regarding the proper word for the original sentence.
     
  4. spnited

    spnited Active Member

    "The playbook, and each of the plays therein, ..." is awkwardly written.

    Simple way:

    "The entire playbook was banned..."

    I really don't want to see the word "therein" in that sentence.
     
  5. "Entire playbook" is redundant
     
  6. Tom Petty

    Tom Petty Guest

    i thought part of the playbook were therein banned.
     
  7. Paper Dragon

    Paper Dragon Member

    yup, therein lies the problem.
     
  8. Ace

    Ace Well-Known Member

    That is a tricky grammar question because usually "and" makes the subject plural.

    But the real answer is to rewrite the sentence to make it simpler, clearer and less awkward.
     
  9. Paper Dragon

    Paper Dragon Member

    therein is the truth, spoken therein by Ace.
     
  10. SF_Express

    SF_Express Active Member

    I'm with ... everybody.

    Sentence as originally presented: was.

    Sentence without the commas: were.

    But it's a bad sentence anyway, so rewrite it.
     
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