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Girls Prep B-Ball Gamer

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by PTSportsWriter, Jan 15, 2007.

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  1. m2spts

    m2spts Member

    Too many words ... story could have been 2/3 shorter and a better read.
    Nothing wrong with it, just a little cumbersome in areas.
     
    m2spts, Feb 19, 2007
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