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Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by andykmoore, Feb 29, 2012.

  1. andykmoore

    andykmoore New Member

    Hey everyone,

    First time ever posting on the site, so bear with me if I break any rules or anything.

    I wanted to get feedback on a story I wrote a few weeks ago about a subject well-known to many of you, John Feinstein: http://dukechronicle.com/article/brink-1. I spent a good amount of time on the story, and I was of course lucky to have a great person to write about, but I'd love some constructive criticism of the piece. I'm trying to make a go of this business after I graduate, so I'd really like to learn as much as I can from this story.


  2. young-gun11

    young-gun11 Member

    Sincerely, this piece is brilliant. Imaginative. Flowing. Full. Beautiful.
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