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Discussion in 'Anything goes' started by IllMil, Aug 11, 2010.

  1. Pilot

    Pilot Well-Known Member

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    How's about you leave the tree and its communal root system alone, capiche?
     
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  2. Rhody31

    Rhody31 Well-Known Member

    Although each tree is unique, he learned they are connected with one root system.
     
  3. 93Devil

    93Devil Well-Known Member

    Would replacing "one" with "single" make the sentence clearer?
     
  4. Rumpleforeskin

    Rumpleforeskin Active Member

    'Why don't you make like a tree...'
     
  5. Buck

    Buck Well-Known Member

    You can't use the third-person plural pronoun with an antecedant of 'tree,' which is what you have in the example.
    You have to rewrite it with a plural antecedant or with singular pronoun.
    There would be many ways to do that, but choosing the best rewrite is not possible without the context of the story.
    All on can really say is that example provided is incorrect. There are many ways to fix it.
     
  6. mustangj17

    mustangj17 Active Member

    Trees are terrific!!
     
  7. Ace

    Ace Well-Known Member

    I think that I shall never see
    a sentence lovely as a tree
    or a unique tree trio sharing a root
     
  8. Buck

    Buck Well-Known Member

    Yet each tree individual to boot.
     
  9. Football_Bat

    Football_Bat Well-Known Member

    Trees are good.

    In my fireplace.
     
  10. bigpern23

    bigpern23 Well-Known Member

    And get outta here.

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  11. Ace

    Ace Well-Known Member

    A tree grows in Brooklyn.

    Or maybe it was three unique trees splitting a root.
     
  12. Rumpleforeskin

    Rumpleforeskin Active Member

    I was going for the 'Boondock Saints' version, but that works as well.
     
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