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Double post; sorry

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by Ralph Smith, Mar 16, 2008.

  1. Ralph Smith

    Ralph Smith New Member

    See above.
     
  2. mustangj17

    mustangj17 Active Member

    Re: Investigative/Enterprise Badminton story (now THERE'S something you never hear)

    Many of your sentences, especially toward the beginning, start with a few words and a comma:

    Nick Jinsada,
    In addition,
    Jinsada,
    The post read,
    But,
    However,

    etc...
     
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