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AP news alert

Discussion in 'Sports and News' started by Writer33, Nov 7, 2007.

  1. John

    John Well-Known Member

    NY Times:

    KENNEDY SPACE CENTER, Fla. Nov. 7 — The shuttle Discovery glided to a safe landing here today, bringing to a close one of the more eventful shuttle missions in the history of the shuttle program.
     
  2. Writer33

    Writer33 Member

    By MARCIA DUNN
    AP Aerospace Writer
    CAPE CANAVERAL, Fla. (AP) — Discovery and its crew returned to Earth on Wednesday and concluded a 15-day space station build and repair mission that was among the most challenging — and heroic — in shuttle history.
     
  3. Batman

    Batman Well-Known Member

    That makes it sound like they cleaned out the space station's garage or something and cleaned up a broken lightbulb.
     
  4. cranberry

    cranberry Well-Known Member

    Marcia Dunn is generally very good and has been covering the beat for an awful long time. Maybe too long?

    On the other hand, it could have been an overzealous desk editor trying to "punch up" the lede.

    You never really know with this sort of thing unless you're watching it happen.
     
  5. Pilot

    Pilot Well-Known Member

    I just like you because you're so positive!
     
  6. Michael_ Gee

    Michael_ Gee Well-Known Member

    The best thing about moving to Verizon FIOS service is now I get the NASA channel! Having watched the outdoor repairs, I'd say "heroic" might be editorializing, but "hair-raisingly dangerous" would be straight news.
     
  7. cranberry

    cranberry Well-Known Member

    True Quam.
     
  8. Sxysprtswrtr

    Sxysprtswrtr Active Member

    And here I thought we were debating the over saturation of AP News Alerts???
     
  9. Pilot

    Pilot Well-Known Member

    Perhaps you haters just didn't know how heroic this mission was.

    [​IMG]
     
  10. SF_Express

    SF_Express Active Member

    I have zero problem with the AP writer who is an expert in this field, presumably, labeling something "heroic," which apparently puts me in the minority here.

    The bigger picture: Putting the handcuffs on writers and expecting "inverted pyramid, just the facts ma'am" reporting to draw and hold readers in this current environment is one of the reasons we're in this current environment.
     
  11. SF_Express

    SF_Express Active Member

    Oh, and yes, with respect to our tireless and dedicated moderators, I think this thread was moved a bit prematurely. This is definitely a journalism topic.
     
  12. Football_Bat

    Football_Bat Well-Known Member

    Maybe AP should release news alerts in heroic couplet form.

    Or a least in limerick form.
     
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