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Advice on my article Please

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by SteveRomano13, May 21, 2014.

  1. SteveRomano13

    SteveRomano13 Member

    Here's a link to my story. Please give me feedback.

  2. Songbird

    Songbird Well-Known Member

    People here argue WAR (both good and what is it good for?) and other SABRmetrics into the ground until the arguments are ground into dust so it's futile to start that kind of argument on this thread.

    But I liked it very much. Clean, informative, opinionated, on-point, not an ounce of belaboring something into the ground. Terrific use of stats and in my mind solid questions based on the stats.

    This was a good graf:

    Baseball voting is a crapshoot. All you have to do is look at the last 2 years with Miggy v. Trout.
  3. SteveRomano13

    SteveRomano13 Member

    Thanks for the read man!
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