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A column

Discussion in 'Writers' Workshop' started by DGRollins, Aug 16, 2007.

  1. DGRollins

    DGRollins Member

    Last one I'll post for a while...It's an opinion piece, something I haven't received feedback on yet.

    Sorry about the Canuck spellings...;) I'm not crazy about the end, it just sort o....
  2. jgmacg

    jgmacg Guest

    DG -

    Thanks for posting. There are a couple of mechanical issues with the piece. "Target," "crosshairs," and "Arrows" unintentionally mixes a metaphor, for example.

    My much bigger concern for the piece is that you're reporting rumor. It's not enough, at least for me, to hide behind the fig leaf of unnamed "critics."

    I think you either have something - confirmed by more than one source - or you don't.

    This is thin ice for a reporter - or a columnist. Tread carefully.
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