Thanks, I didn't notice that until you pointed it out. Also, the semifinal game is being played tomorrow night, and we publish on Thursdays. So, I...
Thank you for the feedback, guys. I really, really appreciate it. Describing the foul situation was one of the parts of the story I struggled...
Hey everyone. I'm looking for a little feedback on this game story I wrote for my weekly paper. Any advice, tips, criticisms would be appreciated....
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